(Untitled) MS Fanfic

[White Oblivion]

-Prologue-

"Robin!" Matthew screamed, running after the car that began to speed away. The panting child stretched out his arm, trying to reach his sister.
It was no use.
The car was already out of Henesys.

"Matthew!" Zach yelled, running up to the young male archer, who was on his knees. "You bastard, don't go chasing after cars ever again! You could get hit by another one!"
The bandit then attempted to pull his younger brother up from the cobble stone streets. Matthew just stayed in his position.

"C'mon," he sighed. "She's only going to the hospital in Kerning. Robin'll be fine, Matt. After all, she is our sister."

Matthew glanced up at his older brother, who was eighteen, five years older than he was.. Tears were streaming down from his hazel eyes.
"It's my fault, isn't it?" he whispered. "Because of me, she's sick, and... she could die..."

Before Zach could ask what he meant, Matthew began his story.

- Flash back -

"What do you care?" Matthew snapped, as he packed his bags, planning to run away from home.
His book of bowman skills, some clothes, and his trusty bow wree already inside. A sheathed knife hung from his belt, and a black baseball cap covered his jet black disheveled hair in an attempt to hide his identity.

Robin, a young girl whose unique silver hair was divided up into two long pigtails, sighed.
"Matt, mom was just depressed. Do you know how hard it is on her, with dad gone, and us barely having any money at all?"

Matthew looked away for a minute, closing his backpack.
"That's why it's better I run away to Sleepywood," he murmured, just loud enough for his sister (who was a year older than him) to hear. And with that being said, Matthew dashed away from his bed, and leaped out of the one floor window. His mind was set.

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His feet landed on one of the levitating platforms to the dungeon from Henesys. Matthew's bow, Xixs, was in both of his hands, aimed toward a creature on the next floating chunk of dirt.
Before he nocked his bow, Robin came.

"Matthew!" she yelled, sweat down her face since she was running.

"Whoa!"
Matthew lost his balance, from the sudden scream, and fell into the valley below, known as the golem pit.
Stone golems were all over the place in there.

"Argh!"
Matthew landed on his back, at the feet of an already angered golem. He covered his head with his arms, knowing that he was about to die, right there and then.
He waited.
And waited.
Then he uncovered himself, and looked around. The golem was facing the other way, toward Robin who had been throwing rocks at it.

"Robin!" Matthew yelled, and tried to get up. But it was already too late. With enormous power, the golem pulled its arm back, and lashed at Robin, knocking her down and out.

"ROBIN!" Matthew shouted again, running toward her. Taking her limp body and slinging it over his shoulder, he started to climb up the rope out of the golem pit and run back to Henesys.



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This is a Maple Story fanfic I had in mind for sometime now. It's about a family of 4 in Henesys, composing of a depressed mother, a responsible brother who has to be the man of the family, and a low self esteem brother and a sickly sister who are pretty close.
I haven't thought it out entirely, so sorry if it sucks. xP

[White Oblivion]

Chapter 1: Decisions

It's been two years since that incident; when Robin was knocked into that coma from the golem.

I stared into the darkness of my room which I shared with my brother Zach. I clutched my blanket tightly, pulling it closer. I was the only person in the dreary house, aside from my disconsolate mother. We never paid any attention to her, though. Now and then we would slide a tray of food under her door to keep her alive. She would die sooner or later now from grief, I knew it.

Who wouldn't when your daughter was in a coma, and your husband was dead?

Sighing, I slipped the sheet over my head, silently crying to myself. For the past two years, I've had nothing but nightmares of that day. Needless to say, I felt as if though it was my fault.

Which, of course, it was.

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Minutes turned into hours, and hours turned into days and nights. Zach was all the way in El Nath of Ossyria, learning and mastering the ways of being a Chief Bandit.

I sat up in my bed, tossing the covers away and standing up. My mind was set; I was going to visit Robin in Kerning City, even if it killed me.

Now that I think about it now, years away from this day, it seems like a rash, reckless idea. But then, it seemed like the greatest one I had ever thought about.

Once again, I packed my bag. This time, I filled it with more items; herbs for potions, more clothes, and some dried meat. The bow and book of bowman skills and techniques were already inside.

As always, the sheathed knife was hanging from my belt, ready to be pulled out at anytime.

When everything I planned to take with me was checked and accounted for, I slipped my backpack over my shoulders and grabbed a pen and piece of paper to leave a note for my brother when he came back from El Nath.

Zach,

I cannot stand the guilt I bear for Robin's accident anymore. I plan to head to Kerning to visit my dear sister. I do not know where my destiny will go from there, but I get the feeling it will take me far away from here.

Please do not try to stop me.
This is something I just have to do.

By the way, congratulations on your job advancement.

Your brother,
Matthew.


Sighing again, I left the note on Zach's bed, knowing that he would see it. Without bothering to think of my mother, I leaped out of the window, running on the path to Kerning City.

Don't worry, Robin, I thought. I'll save you. I promise.

[Jacry Jerkman]

Although I've never actually played MapleStory, you really don't need to for this. Great FanFic!

[White Oblivion]

(Don't remind me of the P.O.V. error in chapter 1, people, pl0x. It's being fixed)

[Latte]

blackrogue said:

(Don't remind me of the P.O.V. error in chapter 1, people, pl0x. It's being fixed)

(Hehehe...)

[Johnnyboy]

WOW!!! nice fanfic

[Prometheus]

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[Avery]

Great job!